#WritingQuoteFebruary #16

I am in editing mode. Does this manuscript make sense? Does it hook and grab a reader, and hold their attention throughout. Enough Victorian detail to give a flavour of authenticity? Too much detail? Too little?

Am I using the right words for the target audience? Do the characters appeal? Is my villain villainous enough? Am I consistent about character motivation? Am I making a mess of the dialect elements?

Editing is laden with self doubt, which is why I thought I’d go for a couple editing quotes on brevity today.

 

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Thomas Jefferson

 

 

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Mark Twain

 

‘The most valuable of all talents is that of never using two words when one will do.’

Thomas Jefferson

‘Substitute “damn” every time you’re inclined to write “very”; your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.’

Mark Twain

 

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